Notes about story things.

[rokkettodan]

Sollux being half-dead and everyone coming back

• jesus christ the spelling mistakes are atrocious

• wording is also atrocious

• i don't think writing a scene that centers around Vriska, Tavros, Feferi and Aradia without having any to very little prior knowledge on how to write them was such a good idea

• look keren i tried arafef for you

• i hope you get lost in the sollux one because he also got lost

• my backto life theory is shit, but then, if there was a plausible, non-retarded way to bring everyone back, the fandom would have hopped onto it right now

• i like how i'm more comfortable writing equius then a lot of the homestuck characters how even

• what is with my roxy and rose, i mean christ(roxy is the only one i feel is really in character, so she's probably not even close)

• how do i rose

• i think equius' pretty blue eyes are only like, partway in. karkat and aradia's are full, tavros's is 80% much full, nepeta and kanaya are a little over full, vriska's a little under full, equius and gamzee are 20% full, and eridan and feferi are just now starting to get flecks of color in them. sollux and terezi are obvs special cases but it terezi weren't blind she'd be a little under half, like vriska, and if sollux weren't blind and had normal eyes to begin with, his would be 80% full
• jade and aradia liketo talk as if they're on a flarping campaign to gather their fallen comrades, so they gave each other codenames. Red East is jades and refers to different parts of the wizard of oz(red shoes, wicked witch of the east). Gospel Majyyks refers to the book Aradia's name was pulled from(something about witch gospels) as well as the teachings of doc scratch to the handmaid(majyyks)
• i like how my writing got comparably better as my sleep depravity increased

reverse conditioning terminology bs

• Archiaradicator and Gamblignants are both canon troll terms

• Reviots is a highblood term for the lowbloods who believe in the rebellion, much like Colossalites is a term that the rebellion uses to refer to the highbloods who believe everything is ok the way they are.

• Reviots is a mixture of Revolutionary and Patriot

• Abrogadmiral is a naval term combined of abrogate(to repeal or do away with) and admiral

• The Scythiculian Deep is a location on Alternia, specifically the deep underwater world that the higher seadwellers live in for the early years of their lives. Even though she lives closer to/on land for political reasons, it's a sign of respect towards your superiors to verbally acknowledge their birthplace as it shows you recognise they are stronger by virtue of growing up in a more dangerous portion of the world. The name was based off of Oceanus Scythicus, which was an old name for the Kara Sea, a sea that Novaya Zemlya Russia. I chose this specific sea because Novaya Zemlya is identifiable if you look on the image of Alternia(it's upside down), and also because Scythicus looks like Scythe, and you know how those trolls love deadly weaponry in their titles and shit.

• Her Highness, Princess Feferi Peixes of the Scythiculian Deep Feferi's honorary title of nobility. I want to find a way to make it longer.

Comments

[0dalesque]

YOU ARAFEF'D WEELL
and nepeta was fantastic, Equius was spot on, Roxy was beautiful, and Rose was also up there with amazing dialouge and presence.

I'm not even gonna point out Vris and Tav because you obviously nailed them wel

[rokkettodan]

Yay!! I tried fo yoooouuuuu :D
I think the only reason Roxy and Rose were good was because I didn't have them do or say too much in total. They were just sort of... there. And fabulous.

Yes, I hope I nailed Tav and Vris, I was rather happy with how I portrayed them.